Sunday, February 8, 2009

Sunday Scribblings

This week's word is Art:

Blood streamed from my body like a faucet, splattering haphazardly into puddles on the legal brief scattered beneath me. Her expression was a mismash of disgust, anguish and fear. As she clinched the bed frame for support, she struggled for words, but nothing cognizable emerged, instead came of stream of gasps, mutterings and deep breaths. I laughed curiously, confused by her failure to grasp the meaning behind my masterpiece. “Do you not see it,” I pleaded. . . . “It represents the cost we have paid for this godforsaken profession.” The tears convinced me that she did not. I had missed my audience, and again, I realized that this, art, was not for me.

6 comments:

Anonymous said...

i think you touched the chords ...
of my inner being!
wonderful expression...
chk mine at
http://eternitycallsus.blogspot.com/2009/02/art-imitates-life.html

Linda Jacobs said...

Intense prose poem! Very vivid images!

Tumblewords: said...

Strong piece that bleeds truth and question...

quin browne said...

i lose words to describe your words, my friend.

needless to say, they never *not* touch me...

floreta said...

powerful opening sentence!

Quill Feather said...

Your writing style is so tight and refreshing.