Sunday, April 26, 2009

Sunday Scribblings

This week’s work is Follow:

Her posture, back story, obvious intelligence and beauty told me that this was not a woman to be missed. In the haze of a lifetime not yet spent together, I saw pets, babies, homes, cars, smiles, tears, pain and the best life I had never known. A lesser impressed man would have chalked this instant insanity up to the copious amounts of beer already consumed on that as of yet unremarkable Thursday night, but not I. This was my moment, and no excuse was going to let me fuck this up. Instead, I waved goodbye to my previous self, and wished me all the best. She was going to be my alter, answer, and leader. Walking out of that bar, I knew my role, and that was to accompany her to the ends of the earth. Like any true believer, I have faltered, forgotten my path, and wandered unaccompanied during our days, but I always know where my salvation will come, and that is at your side. So with this, please know that I, your devote disciple, will follow you regardless of the cost, and still know that you are not to be missed . . . . ever.

7 comments:

murat11 said...

This one packs a lovely wallop. In the haze of a lifetime not yet spent...: very fine. Wonderful, if this was your experience. If not yet, wonderful that it will be.

Thanks for your visit over my way.

Tumblewords: said...

Wonderfully posed thoughts and emotion - the knowing is strong and powerful.

Devil Mood said...

Oh this is so beautiful. I loved the part about waving the old self goodbye.

floreta said...

very romantic :)

paisley said...

an absorbing piece of writing....

The illDefined said...

well done. really.

Switching persons in the middle is risky, but you made it work. powerfully.

quin browne said...

i live with the belief that home is someone, not something.

this is so lovely, my friend...