Sunday, March 14, 2010

Sunday Scribblings (The Book That Changed Everything)

This week's prompt is The Book That Changed Everything: The note and key to the office were next to the coffee maker. Bert, it is done, thoughts? I trembled as I approached the unknown. This was her lair. The walls were adorned with black and white photographs of her favorite authors, the shelves contained the life works of the same, the desk was a dark mahogany monstrosity sitting atop a blood red carpet, and the chair was a weathered hand-me-down from her father. It smelled of crushed daisies. A better part of her waking hours were spent here. As long as I had known her, which was twenty-two years, I had never once been invited in. Truth be told, I had never seen another pass through those doors. In my youth, I pestered, prodded and pled to know the going-ons. For nine years, she withstood my barrage and remained silent. She is tough that way. It is why I loved her. Then one day, to my delight, she stated, after asking for creamer, “I am writing my life's thoughts.” Nothing else was said. I accepted this nugget, imagined a monumental manuscript, and proudly announced to all that would listen that my bride was crafting the next great American novel. In her, I knew nothing less than perfection would find its way to the page. On the desktop sat a leather-bound book wrapped in a carpet matching ribbon. I untied it with the greatest of care, and listened closely as the binding broke. Being the first to open such a magnificent piece was something I did not want to pass me by. It was entitled My Thoughts. The dedication read “To all who have crossed my path.” In anticipation of the read, I called out of work, retrieved my coffee, removed my shoes and sat back in the chair. To say I was overcome with pride would be an understatement. I dove in. Page 1: I was not put on this earth to settle for this. Page 2: I was not put on this earth to settle for this. Page 3: I was not put on this earth to settle for this. Page 4: I was not put on this earth to settle for this. . . . It never changed, six hundred and thirty-three pages of the same line. I leaned back, aching heart in my chest, and cried.

11 comments:

Stan Ski said...

Poor Bert - his bubble has well and truly burst.

Unknown said...

That's wrenching. And a fantastic read!

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Jae Rose said...

Fantastic writing. I love that repetition it really illustrates the weight and sadness of the message. Thanks for your visit..Jae

Ariel said...

That was soo sad.She didn't deserve him.
Thank you for visiting ariel.

robkistner said...

Piercing, thank you for sharing…
…rob
Image & Verse

Bee Bee said...

Brilliant piece.

It is painful but it is far more painful to the wife to have gone through life with such a compromise.

What a response to the prompt!

Dee Martin said...

Whoa, did not expect that. So tragic for both of them. One tiny thing, only because this is so wonderful - you used layer when I believe you meant lair. I often hit post before I edit :)

Catherine Denton said...

So smartly woven and surprising. Loved it!

Anonymous said...

nice. very nice. and i have no idea why i thought of ethan frome-none whatsoever.